I
worked late tonight just ready to get home and eat some dinner. What's that.
Hey, my pocketbook! The thief fell down. Good thing it's heavier than this boy.
I kick him "right square in his
blue-jeaned sitter." He probably not more than 14. I pick him up and now
am face to face with this boy. All I am thinking what is wrong with this boy. I
am so angry at this boy, people are watching and I don't care. Maybe I should
change the way this boy thinks. Yeah, I will take him back to my place right
now.
In this piece the
lady didn't seem like the victim. She didn't seem scared of the boy. She also
didn't the cops, all she did was kick him and turned him into the victim. At
most she was angry. Once she started dragging the boy I think that Roger most
likely regretted ever take the chance of stealing the pocketbook.
nice, if we knew what she was thinking you would have got it right on. maybe you could have lengthened it more.
ReplyDeleteReally nice! Awesome word choice! Try to work on making it longer though.
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