Author's Note: I am explain a funny time during my winter break.
During
winter break I was playing Kinect Sports 2 with my friend. We were
playing football and he was ready to punt it away. He kicks but while he
does that his other leg flies up to and he falls on his back. It looked
liked a cartoon character slipping on a banana peel. It was a perfect
punt.
I am not intrigued by the title. To improve your post I would describe the event more clearly and be more descriptive. I liked the simile of how it looked like a cartoon character slipping on a banana peel, you did that well. I am eager to hear more of the story. The topic is great, though I would describe it better. Good post.
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