Author’s Note: This is a response to my new book Animal Farm by George Orwell. So far I have read up to chapter 7. If you could give some feedback that would be great.
Now that I am starting to get into the book I see how this is a lot like the Russian revolution. But the one point in the book that makes me mad, but of course it has to be exactly like the Russian revolution. Right now one of my favorite characters is Snowball. Snowball is supposed to be like Trotsky in the Russian revolution, well that is what I think.
One reason he is like Trotsky, because he gets kicked off the farm. Napoleon kicks off the farm, I think because he scared Snowball will take over. The reason I don’t like is that Napoleon says that Snowball destroys the windmill. What if he did not. Maybe this a scheme from Napoleon just to kill Snowball and have the other animals on his side.
I like Snowball the best too and it kind of annoyed me when he got kicked off although I thought it might happen.
ReplyDeleteGreat post Matt. I liked how you talked about why you think snowball was Trotsky, and Napoleon kicking off the farm.
ReplyDeleteI like how you stressed your opinion about how you didn't like what Napoleon did. Also the sentense "But the one point in the book that makes me mad, but of course it has to be exactly like the Russian revolution." was a little weird. I think that you were trying to say that that part of the book made you mad but it had to be like the russian revolution. I liked how you expressed yor ideas. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Evan, I do like the way you expressed your ideas, but some sentences were a little weird.
ReplyDeleteI like how you expressed your opinion so well, and based the entire piece off of one event. You do have some grammatical errors, that with a little proof-reading, would be gone. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour organization is good. You could make it a little better by taking the first two sentences of the second paragraph and putting them in the first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGreat job staying away from summarizing, it's pretty hard not to do with this book. I liked how you shared your opinion without criticizing other people's opinions. Good job!
ReplyDeleteSnowball is a great character. Your getting much better at not summarizing the book which is really great. Nice job adding text evidence too. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used your opinion in the end and I liked how you expressed how Snowball was kicked out.
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