Thursday, November 10, 2011

Nothing gold can last forever

Author's Note: This was a poem in the outsiders. I will be writing  about what I think it means.

I think that the poem means that everything good can't last forever. I think this could refer to Darry. He was super athletic, smart, and had scholarships to colleges. He could went but his parents died and he became the guardian of his 2 brothers.
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4 comments:

  1. Gabe O.November 16, 2011 at 1:19 PM

    Good idea. In your author's note, include what you want feedback on.

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  2. Alex VNovember 16, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Its good, i don't see anything wrong.

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  3. Evan GNovember 16, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    I agree with Gabe, your author's note has a good idea. You had a few excellent points in your piece too.

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  4. Jack's Awesome blogDecember 1, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    I think that this is a good piece and nothing is wrong accept for one sentence that I think that does not make sense. "He could went but his parents died and he became the guardian of his 2 brothers." I don't get that part in the beginning were you say "He could went.."

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