The Tell-Tale Heart

So tell me is he insane? I think he is. He may say that he is sane, but some of the things he does really makes me doubt that. I believe that he is insane.

There is this guy (his name was not mentioned) who works for this old man. This is no ordinary old man because he has the Evil Eye. The man decides to kill the man to destroy the evil, because that is the most sane thing you can do.  The man suffocates the old man with a mattress. Then he chops in up into little pieces and hides them underneath the floorboards.   

First of all why kill someone just because their eye. Why would you kill someone in the first place. Then chop them up into little pieces. What is wrong with this guy? This guy is definitely insane.

Patriot's Pen

Are you proud of your country? I am proud of my country. They started this country from 13 small colonies; defeated England to win our freedom and worked up from nothing to make this great nation named America. In this you have your own rights and you can choose what religion you are. I am not saying everything the US did was perfect, but I would say we are a pretty great country.  

Conclusion Practice

Author's Note: This was our assignment to practice writing conclusions for a fiction short story. I thought it was a good ending because of the twist. Feedback would be great. 

On her way to deliver the poison apple to Snow White, the Evil Queen got hungry. She was so hungry she was about to faint. All she had was the apple; it looked so perfect. Her hand started shaking. Her face started sweating. She starts to lift the apple towards her mouth. Right as she's just about ready to take a bite………………DOMO jumps out of the bush, slaps the apple out of her hand, and throws her off the Grand Canyon!!        THE END

Frank and the Giant Cheese Problem

Frank owned a cheese castle in England, but there were never any customers. So he decided to sell the store and start a potato factory in Idaho. Where he could build his own potatoes. After he sold his castle he took one more look at his castle and he saw a giant sign that he had never seen before and it looked like it had been there for years and it said "Closed."